I was lost….
I am trapped in a place where I see nothing but darkness
The undisturbed silence gives way to hear the fearful beat of my heart
I took a few dubious steps in search of hope and truth
The steps turned into walk, walk turned into journey
I didn’t know where to go, then there came You and lit my path
Lord, I did not find You; You found me
I was unworthy…
I live in a world where wrong is forced to be right
And breeding the egg of evil seems to be the favorite hobby of man
At a certain point I became one of them, unconsciously…. or maybe consciously
I’m sorry for disappointing You, I was unfaithful and careless
The love You gave, the forgiveness You’ve made
Lord, I did not deserve any of it but You gave it to me wholeheartedly
I was hopeless…
In the abyss of my solitude, I feel so alone
Trials just keep on coming like heavy rain on rainy days
I want to run, and think that escape is the only solution I got on hand
I was in despair when a shaft of light coming from the sun touched my face
Suddenly a rainbow appeared, beautifully painted on the sky
Lord, You provided a rainbow after the rain; a reason in each problem I overcame
I am loved….
When I think of the cross, I think of my weakness
The sins I committed were unimaginable, likewise, unforgivable
But instead of judging me, You offer your hand to yank me up
I looked at it and see the nail-pierced hole, blood gushing out from it
I turned my sight into my hands and see the hammer on the right, nails on the left
Lord, the cross reminds me of my weakness, but moreover, it reminds of your undying love
I am favored…
Every day I wake up and fail to see that life itself is a miracle
Sometimes I was so busy earning a living that I forget how to live
I chased the wrong things and overlooked what is really important in life
Today , let me just express my gratitude to You , to You who always provide
Thank you for your unlimited patience and overflowing blessings
Lord, I really don’t know what did I do to be loved by You
I am victorious….
My life has so many ups and downs, twists and turns
I’ve been through bad times and placed in life’s edges
I managed to surpass them all not because I am strong
But because my God is strong… and loving…. and caring
Whenever I achieved something or reached a new milestone in my life
Lord, I know you are there smiling like a proud father
You are the busiest being I’ve ever known
So, I need to end this letter before it turns out to be a novel
Neither did I play with the words I’ve used here nor rhyme everything
For simplicity never fails me to express the deepest emotions I have
I believe that it’s not the words but the pureness of my heart that reaches Yours
Lord, this letter is my prayer, this letter is my life written only for You
P.S. I Love You
Your Son,
Moises John
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Ang tulang ito ay nagkamit ng ikatlong karangalan sa ” A Letter to God contest “ ni Mommy Joy ng www.joysnotepad.blogspot.com
Nakakatuwa kasi perstaym kong sumali sa contest na english which is hirap na hirap talaga ako (noseblood me?) tapos ayun naka 3rd pa. Kahit siguro hindi ako nakapasok sa top 3 pakiramdam ko panalo pa rin ako kasi naiangat ang pangalan ni Lord. All praises and glory and honor to HIM. 🙂
Salamat sa nagproofread nito. ( kilala mo kung sino ka) 🙂
Salamat Lord sa inspirasyon. Without you I am nothing.
Goodvibes lang everyone 🙂
Wagas sa damdamin.
kung maka “wagas” haha.. eto ang wagas na comment :p
kahit late na late congrats bagotilyo! ganda grabe! parang hindi ko kayan gawin itp kailan ko muna ulit pumasok sa school heheh
mabuhay!
huli man daw at magaling huli pa din. hahaha
Kaya mo yan no. :p
Aloha!
clap! clap! clap! ang galing parekoy. nakakainspire! God Bless you bro!
musta na?
uy pare koi! its been a while.
eto ok naman,
kaw musta na?
Godbless you more.
Congrats!!! Ang galing mo, apir!
apir tayo jan! *high five*
Nagcomment ako dito pero prang nwala haha … Dear lord crush ko po si bagotilyo haha
hahaha .. pumasok ang comment mo :p
Crush este bagotilyo hahaha 🙂 sa ganda ng message nito pede ka na magpari haha
ayoko mag pari. marumi ako. lol
Amen! ang ganda nit0 s0bra! :)) habang binabasa ko ramdam n ramdam q bwat words ehh. c0ngrats po! :)))
Salamat po. Inspirasyon ko c LORD eh 🙂
Amen to this post.. I am inspired.. and driven to keep my faith. Thanks!
nakakatuwa namang malaman na na inspired ka sir 🙂 Godbless.
amen…:)) How great is our God. I feel so blessed nung nakilala ko siya. ang saya ko kasi tinanggap ko siya sa life ko kumpara dati na wala siya. tsaka marami jan na naliligaw pa ng landas. We do sins pero nandyan si Lord to forgive and love us. Ang laki ng guilt ko dahil hindi ko siya binibigyan ng time. 😦 Godbless sayo:)
ang importante hindi natin binibitiwan yung faith natin sa kanya. At yung mga oras na alam mong nagkukulang ka , atleast aware ka. aware tayo sa mga kakulangan natin. Godbless po.
wow ang galing tumula at mag-umingles a clap clap! congrats din ha 🙂
di naman bro. di na natuloy ang mahabang kwentuhan natin ah. hehhe .. 🙂
Congrats on winning. Buti na lang di ako sumali pahiya lang sana ako sa mga winners ehehe…
inenglish mo ko dun sa ” Congrats on winning” ah. nataranta ako ng slight. buti hindi pure english ang comment. hahaha
I’m so touched. Thanks for this. Made me realized something.
no need to thank me. Karangalan kong maitaas ang pangalan ni Lord 🙂
isa pa ding busy. looking forward for your next post bagotilyo ;-D
salamat sa pagbisita phioxee :))
nakakaiyak…heartwarming 🙂
tissue?? 🙂
san ka nagchuchurch ser?
sa UCCC sir. bakit po?
congrats ser!
salamat sir. ^______^
wowwwmoh! i just read this 2nite! congratulations! these past weeks were really crazy but i have that unfinished proj 4u— pls be patient. GODbless!
still waiting for that unfinished project. hehe
Godbless you tita ninang. :)))
Superb writing!
*epistaxis ARGH.
ams epistaxis ako nung sinusulat ko yan. english bro! I cant believe it! hahha
congratulations 🙂
thanks! 🙂
Blow out ninong! Ang galing mo talaga! You’re the best!
maka ” Youre the best” lang ninong no. cge best man ako sa kasal mo ah? wahhaha
Fav lines: I managed to surpass them all not because I am strong
But because my God is strong… and loving…. and caring
Inspiring pre! Thumbs up! 🙂
totoong totoo yang line na yan. two thumbs up. ^_^
ellow, bagotilyo… tamo, ka-drama ng umpisa, “I am trapped in a place where I see nothing but darkness.” 😉 ayan naman, pag si bagotilyo ang nagsabi, nakakabagbag-damdamin, ahaha.
hoy, bruho, darating ang magmamahal sa ‘yo, uu. lovable kang nilalang, tandaan mo ‘yon, lagi… keep well ~ ate san
haha … bakit ba kasi ang emo ko?
mas tama siguro sabihing bakit ba ang bipolar ko? minsan emo minsan manic. hahhahaha
Im well , wishing well 🙂
musta na?
– john
ewan ko, magsulat ka ng bago at nang may mabasang makulit. 😉
wishing you well din. pakabait na tayo, tingin mo? 😉
good idea.
dapat maraming pogi points sa langit. heheheh
simula ngayon magiging goodboy n ko. 😀
deal? hehhe
haha, parang i detect a sense of insincerity there? or, may diperensya sadya ang pandinig ko? 😉 malamang…
hehe .. tama .. Good vibes lang ! *inhale..exhale*
Thanks sa comments mo sir sa blog ko 🙂
walang anuman po.
Congrats po!
salamat po :))
congrats! ang galing. 🙂
big thanks. :p
congrats bagotilyo! ang ganda din naman kasi ng letter mo to God.
salamat po. salamat di nsa madalas na pag daan kahit wala akong bagong post. hehehe
Inspiring. Di ako mahilig magread ng tula pero thumbs up talaga ako dito dahil sa message.
naks. salamat naman po ng madami. ^^
I so much love this pards! maganda siyang gawing daily prayer. Pero ito ang pinakatumatak sakin: “Lord, I did not find You; You found me”
basta, am so proud of you, pang-First place yang gawa mo, pero third place is not bad either 🙂 congrats uli…
lilibre mo n ko ng lomi niyan?? heheh
Scribbling thoughts in honor to Him is a priceless fulfillment, more than any other rewards you could ever have. Congrats!! Di na tayo nagkita.
oo nga ang busy mo na kasi doc! hahha
anong pinagsasabi mo? haha
disoriented ako nitong mga huling araw. pagbigyan mo n ko. tara na magbowling. lol
Congrats, Bagotilyo!
thanks sir empi!
nakaka-inspire…congrats!
tenkyu tenkyu po.
your poem is one of my favs. congrats ulit
pramis? lol :p
congrats moi.. ikaw na!
salamat jeison. hehe
Congratulations Parekoy! Deserve mo yan.
salamat pareng vincent. Godbless satin.
Congrats your work deserve it.
thanks. ( yun n lng nasabi) english kasi eh nauubusan :p
walang duda na magaling ka talaga 🙂 Congrats ulit 😀
may halong bola ba yan o ano? hahaha
congrats parekoy! haha nice blowout na yan!
kaw na ung inspiration ng contest kaw pa isa sa winner!
galing mo talaga! haha kudos parekoy
salamat parekoy.
blowout eh di ka naman nagpapakita sakin. wahahhaha
wow. . 😀 hanep ang ganda ng letter .. 🙂 I think when you writing this letter I think God send his wisdom to write this extraordinary letter.. Although we are sinners but the love of our God is still. And He offer his own life just for us to be saved from our sins. I feel so bless when i’m reading this. GOOD JOB.! And I hope that you can write more and more in GOD’S WILL. Always Pray and ask knowledge and wisdom to God.:)
Again Good Job you did a VERY VERY VERY BEST LETTER that i’ve Read..:)
Salamat pareng christian.
TO GOD be all the glory.
winter camp na ah.. kasama ka ba?
Deserving! Ang galing. Thumbs up. Congrats bagotilyo 😛
salamat sir archie.
di ako masyadong emo sa post na to! congrats mo ko. whahahah 🙂
wow ang galing hehehe 🙂 ok lang yan basta galing sa puso…..
hinugot sa puso yan bro. hehehe…
kamusta ang pamumundok?
🙂
galing. congrats! hihihi. super deserve mo naman eh.
salamat.super deserve tlga? hehe.
Galing talaga! Lika nga, apir! (ikaw pa talaga pinalapit?) hahaha! Dagdag na naman sa awards mo to. 😛
lika saan?? itetreat mo ko? hehehhe
salamat sir 🙂
Maski ako talaga na in love din sa letter na eto:)
Congratulation again:)
mommy joy. big thanks sa iyo.
hindi lang sa pagkakapanalo kung hindi pati sa contes na ito for GOD 🙂
Godbless you always.
Huwaw congrats MJ :)) super makabuluhan at meaningful naman talaga itong letter to God mo for Mommy Joy’s contest. Galing! Pa burger ka nah!!!
burger lang pla eh.!! burger lang ah wala yung patty :p
whahahha